tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36174792.post1934242163295106383..comments2023-08-05T11:39:59.112+02:00Comments on Dreams and Daemons : An unusual challengesciencebodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12051016731274875332noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36174792.post-73361800660563893782007-05-14T00:44:00.000+02:002007-05-14T00:44:00.000+02:00Hi GigiSorry to be so long in replying. Things hav...Hi Gigi<BR/><BR/>Sorry to be so long in replying. Things have been a bit hairy today on My telegraph.<BR/><BR/>Your comments are very useful, and will remind me in future not to get side-tracked, even if opportunities for wry comment have to be sacrificed. As you say, one has to keep it tight.sciencebodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051016731274875332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36174792.post-14002379266383088182007-05-13T20:36:00.000+02:002007-05-13T20:36:00.000+02:00It's not bad at all, Colin. It needs tightening up...It's not bad at all, Colin. It needs tightening up a bit but you did say it was 'speedwriting' so that's normal. You could cut phrases such as "more accurately erstwhile friends", "why you may ask?" and maybe the details about the car deal...but I read the story to the end and that's always a good sign!! <BR/><BR/>Keep posting 'em...Gigihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07442510440531817842noreply@blogger.com